Monday, January 16, 2012

I don't think we are in Kansas anymore.. Descriptive Writing: Storm

Students were asked to write a short, descriptive passage about a storm.  As inspiration we looked at a photograph of a stormy sky.








As I sat out in the graveyard, reading my book, I saw the sky become gray.  I examined it and realized there was a storm coming in.  Large gray clouds roiling through the sky like giant-sized dust bunnies doubled in size, consuming the once baby blue sky.  Wind roared louder than a lion and lightning flashed more times than my brother has ripped my homework (which is a lot!).


I raced to my brick house in the middle of the wheat field when suddenly a black, shady figure came up and grabbed me.  Its fingers were slimy and green, which made the storm even more horrifying...


I screamed as I awoke from my dream of dark figures and overly terrifying storms.  I looked around my room to see only a slight rain falling from the sky.  I have quite and imagination...

                                                                                                                          Written by Megan


Oh no!  There is a storm coming!  "What do we do?"  It is huge and the winds are turning like a blender and the clouds are dark as a black cat.  It is coming straight towards us and it's pouring down rain.  There are bolts of lightning lighting up the dark blue sky.  How do we survive?  We turn on the news and the report comes in:  HURRICANE!  The thunder is like an avalanche of boulders.  Over night we will wait and see.


The sun comes up shining through the dark cloud and the storm is finally done.  We made it through and I can't wait until the next evening storm!
                                                                                                                        Written by Juliana


The storm was immense and dark black.  It shot large bolts of lightning out of the center of its heart.  The storm was raging with rain as it struck the grasslands.  Houses were boarded up; every door was shut!  This was the most deadly storm that had taken over the beautiful blue sky, but now it's like a lion roaring and gaining on you.  Every minute the storm illuminated different parts and was turning pitch black like a Raven's eye spying on you; watching you sleep.  The ugly storm wouldn't scatter away.


                                                                                                                        Written by Chase




Oh no!  A storm is coming!  A dark haze of thick fog filled the air as the healthy forest green grass started trembling. The gray misty clouds filed the black, smoky sky.  Slowly, tiny globes of ice showered down on one rooftop followed by others.  Suddenly, two bright bolts of lightning zipped through the air, blinding me.  Thunder crackled and thudded the earth as people locked their doors and hid.
The tall trees were getting knocked down by the furious winds.  The waves in the dark, grayish-blue ocean lifted up and crashed over the houses.  A few hours later the storm ended; leaving behind nothing but hope for one person... me.


                                                                                                                        Written by Cailyn




CRAAAACK!  The dark gray sky whips through the air as the wind wisps, 35 miles per hour, blowing the algae green grass away.  Lightning bolts, the color of pure gold, strike a newly planted Oak tree in my yard.  The eye of the storm stirs above my house as if it were my mom stirring cake batter.  As I stick my head out of my window I can feel a nice wind pushing my face; tiny droplets run down my face, trying to get away from the creamy, gray storm.  Dark clouds inch their way towards me, rolling closer.  As I prepare for the storm, the wind pours into my lava-orange room.  I slam shut the heavy peek hole, then fall into a deep sleep.


                                                                                                                         Written by Jesse

Saturday, November 26, 2011

Poetry is Alive and Well in the 5th Grade!

When I was two
I went to the zoo.
It was so awesome
because I saw the opossum.

My favorite part
was the hippopotamus race start,
but we had to go so soon,
because we had to arrive home before noon.

I was so sad
because it was so bad,
that we had to leave the zoo,
so I said, "boo!"

I had a good night
because the stars were so bright,
and the constellations
looked like decorations.
                                   -Shruti




When I was little, I went to Hershey Park
I got inside the park, it started to pitter patter
my mom said it did not matter
so we stayed until it was dark.

While we were there
I rode the Great Bear
where you sit in a chair
and ride the rollercoaster upsidedown.

It was lots of fun
I got to play and run
all over the park
until the day was done.

My favorite thing
that wasn't a ride,
was a big, huge waterslide
I love Hershey Park.
                                       -Hunter




Her blonde, golden hair flows through the wind
her eyes sparkle in the bright sun.
When she plays on the Wii, she has so much fun.
Her name sounds like love.

When I look at her I think I am in heaven.
When she talks to me it sounds like birds.
Also, she does not blurt out screaming when I miss a word.
Last, she looks like ten midnight stars in the night.
                                                   -Porter


My outrageous cat
is afraid of a chair.
She wears a hideous hat,
but doesn't have any hair!

She can write with a pen,
but never writes with pencil.
And plays with Barbie and Ken,
and will blow on a windmill.

She can never tell a lie,
but will always talk.
She never wants to say goodbye,
although she won't walk.

                                          -Skyllar


As I read the Raven,
I was scared to go anymore.
I went and read the next sentence,
it was, "forgotten folk tales and lore."

As the next page was flipped,
I thought there'd be some gore.
As I started to read,
there was a rapping at my door.

I went and turned the door knob,
as a black winged creature flew in.
I jumped back in fear across the carpet,
I thought it might have brought in a sin.

I screamed, "Go back to your home,"
but all it did was stare.
I felt it was looking at my soul,
and then just gave it a tear.

My heart scorched and burned,
as the pain dragged me to the ground.
I looked and stared with anger,
as it made a devilish sound.

I went and covered my ears
as I thought my life was done,
but then I opened my eyes,
and it was just my mind having fun.
                                              - Raphael

Roses are red
Violets are blue
You are not nice
So I'm not talking to you!
                                        -Ashlei